Many working people get little exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Doing regular exercise has a contributory in health. Unfortunately, a lot of employees do not have an active lifestyle; the major factor behind this is the lack of exercise. People nowadays are so encircled in their working schedules that they neglect their health. In running days, work pressures are increased, owing to rapidly changing market trends and revenue expectations; companies are considering employees as machines to overwork. In turn people have a lot of responsibilities at work and at home. Busy lifestyle leads to lack of time for basic activities such as going to the gym or spend leisure time with family. In addition, some of the employees can often go to the business trips consequence; they do not have normal life style schedules. If even working people arrive home after work in case at late hours the probably have to pay attention their children or other family members. So, people become workaholic which is adversely affecting their life in a negative way. It is obvious, that the solution of this essential issue is not only responsibility of an individual but also the company people are working for. The majority amount of companies should provide employees benefits such as 50% payment for annual visit fitness gyms or even organize at workplace gym facilities which should available with required equipments and instructors. Moreover, awareness campaigns should run over the importance of exercise and designated the time should be allotted to each employee for exercise. In a nutshell, it is irrespective, how much money a person is making. Health should be given priority, there are certain factors affecting our health already such as pollution, noise and stress. We should take proactive measures to prevent early old age symptoms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 639, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... leisure time with family. In addition, some of the employees can often go to the business ...
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Line 1, column 967, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...which is adversely affecting their life in a negative way. It is obvious, that the solution of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88665746748 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1316100114 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240831276409 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836461294375 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655231672364 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240831276409 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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