You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter:
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain how this problem is affecting your work
- say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to you because I have problem with cooking equipment that I bought in your shop several days ago. I urgently want to inform you about serious problem with it. It works some days good some not. Yesterday plate worked very badly again. I force to repair it by myself and now it is working quite well. I am a cook. I am baking, cakes and bread for customers.
And if my cooking equipment does not work properly I will lose a lot of time and money. In addition, my customers can be very disappointed in my poor service.
Moreover, I consider them very important customers for me. I think that they help to my business a lot to become more profitable. If my business stop because of breaking equipment that I bought from your shop I force to ask from you compensation.
Yours sincerely,
Ivan Choklia
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have problem with cooking equipment that I bought in your shop several days ago. ...
^^^
Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repairing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: repairing
... plate worked very badly again. I force to repair it by myself and now it is working quit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it is working quite well. I am a cook. I am baking, cakes and bread for customer...
^
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: asking
...nt that I bought from your shop I force to ask from you compensation. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47058823529 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56167463595 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4144755449 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.6153846154 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272349775531 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079312684689 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976717366141 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15365216437 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948304897418 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have problem with cooking equipment that I bought in your shop several days ago. ...
^^^
Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repairing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: repairing
... plate worked very badly again. I force to repair it by myself and now it is working quit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it is working quite well. I am a cook. I am baking, cakes and bread for customer...
^
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: asking
...nt that I bought from your shop I force to ask from you compensation. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47058823529 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56167463595 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4144755449 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.6153846154 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272349775531 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079312684689 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976717366141 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15365216437 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948304897418 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.