You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
describe the training course
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about a training course I am going to participate in.
The course is about implants and how to administer them. The lecturers are from top periodontologists and most experienced ones in implantology. It has been planned to talk about different kinds of implants in several speeches, and live implant’s surgery will be done, as well.
I was wondering if it is possible for the company to help me to take part in this course. Firstly, although I have already called several hotels in the city which course takes place in, it is so helpful for me that the company arranges the accommodation since I have already spend a pile load of money on registration for the course and buying the tickets. Secondly, it would be such a relief to me if the manager talks to the clinic’s team and asks them to take care of my patients while I am gone.
As you already know, it has been some months since our implantologist separated from the clinic, and the patients in need of an implant were referred to other clinics. I assume, after this course, not only can I take care of this kind of patients, but I can consult the colleagues with the treatment plans with their current patients whether to extract the teeth or not.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Dr. Aidin Farughi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... the accommodation since I have already spend a pile load of money on registration fo...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...act the teeth or not. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Dr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6625 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78634754453 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.542440252 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187015623225 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633571858846 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485351110857 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798876364776 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437600450042 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.