some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. give your opinion and explain both views.
On which age one should experience being employed has been a matter of conflict for many years. In some countries, it is believed that it is beneficial for teenagers to have a part-time job and they are encouraged to do so, while in other countries, people disagree and state it is detrimental for them. I stand with the latter group due to several reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, having a Saturday job as a teenager may result in poverty in the adulthood. Firstly, the pivotal task of one as a teenager is the education, thus spending some time to work is a distraction from what is of utmost importance. Secondly, having a salary as a kid, while one is not mature enough to know how to handle it, may be harmful for one’s performance in the school; inasmuch as not only do they waste money on leisure activities and waste more of their precious time, but they probably question the sole of being educated and become reluctant toward studying the lessons. Consequently, being employed as a teenager could result in bad scores and poor educational degree as an adult, leading to a low paying job, poverty and sadness.
Moreover, one might suffer and be in pain for the rest of his life due to working as a kid. Workplaces are hazardous areas, and an employee must be trained well does he want to be safe and secure. Since employees usually do not train the applicants well, young staff are at high risk of facing accidents, injuries and disabilities, which torments them forever.
Granted what was said, it must be taken into account that experiencing the market at an early age can help one in the path toward success. One will know himself and requirements of the market sooner than the others by working part-time as a teenager, which helps him in selecting the major and encourages him in the university to try harder. As a result, this advantage aids him to become a more successful adult.
To sum up, even though working on Saturdays may help a child to select the career, it is considered a bad thing. Being employed part-time as a kid distracts one from his most important duty, education, and has even the potential to cripple him.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68393782383 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67458911567 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.930367441 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144379743694 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499834265547 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656072613001 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807096727407 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546182407818 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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