Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places ?
Where to visit on holidays has been a matter to conflict among people for many years. While some prefer to go on safe and easy-to-travel places to relax, others are fond of places with difficult conditions. Today more tourists are attracted to such places, which has its own benefits and disadvantages.
To begin with advantages, going to places with difficult conditions makes one a better person. First, it is believed that if one lives in a convenient place, like what is routine in these days modern life, he will eventually become weak and lazy. On the other hand, by going to places like the Antarctic, one can experience hard conditions, get out of the safe routine and even try hard to just survive. Thus, one can become a stronger person who is afraid of nothing, or in other words “ what doesn’t kill me makes me stronger”. Second, when one tries living in a difficult condition in which he has to endeavor for even a warm bowl of soup, he will gratitude the nice comfortable condition he has at home. Therefore, not only will he realize the value of what comes easy in modern life like the food or accommodation, but he will not waste them anymore. I personally believe a strong person who values everything is a better person than an ordinary weak nagging citizen. For instance, the movie “128 hours” , which is based on a real event, shows that how hard it is in a desert to survive and even find water, which in in comparison of what viewers usually live by.
Granted what was said, it must be taken into account that tourists of places like the Antarctic are the reason of pile load of money wasted every year. These places have difficult hazardous conditions in which there is a considerable risk of accidents and even death. Thus, governments are forced to attribute some of the budget, which can be used elsewhere, to save these tourists when they face imminent danger of death.
To sum up, even though the Antarctic or deserts have difficult conditions to live, they are visited by more tourists every year. These tourists try to become better people this way and simply do not care about the money which would be spent to save them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72251308901 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6082309434 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6827898626 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291067290626 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945387627453 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073394998996 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198055648002 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872397596279 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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