Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Doing part time occupation in the age of juvenile is considered positive development in many countries. However, some nations believe it is detrimental for the young lings. In my opinion, they both have advantages and disadvantages. I will explain this in the following paragraph.
Owing to the fact that a student who works have numerous benefits.First of all, time management is considered to be the pivotal factor for getting better outcomes. Student who works part time learn this art very well, as he have to maintain the time management between studies and work. Second of all, spending budget in control manner is an art which is essential for day to day spending, student who works learn this art quickly as they know the worth of hard it to earn money.They feel independent and spends money very wisely.
On the other hand, scattered focus might not have fruit full results. Student who works might not able to maintain balance between his studies and work as a result most of the children get fail in their academic course. It is evident learning new things by students my vary person to person. Sometimes children with low IQ strive hard for success.Therefore, they need a lot of concentration to get better results. For Instance, Student with low understanding of Math need a lot of practice in their homes to pass the course.
To conclude, I believe Part time employment is better for the individual and the society as well. It is also a factor which can boost the economy of the country,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79790466897 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7310334519 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116342912694 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482351219654 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451006278912 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808034814735 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503019677621 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.