Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
Write a letter replying to your friends offer. In your letter:
explain what you know about your friends company
choose whether you accept or decline the offer
give reasons for your choice
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that i am accepting you job offer.
I have completed my master's degree in computer science with majors in Artificial Intelligence. I am aware that your company is building software related to Artificial intelligence. I have used your famous software for my research that is virtual personalities.
After completion of my degree, i was desperately searching for the job with two main priorities. Firstly, It should be in the field of Artificial intelligence. Secondly, the office location should be in Canberra. Fortunately, your job offer is full filling both of my requirements.
I am pleased to accept your offer for the position of Software Engineer, and i am eager to join your office at my earliest. We have university convocation which is held on 3 November 2018. I look forward to starting employment on 5 November 2018.
Thank You very much for considering me for this position.
Yours Sincerely,
Bilal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing this letter to inform you that i am accepting you job offer. I have c...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u that i am accepting you job offer. I have completed my masters degree in com...
^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with majors in Artificial Intelligence. I am aware that your company is building ...
^
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are related to Artificial intelligence. I have used your famous software for my r...
^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ties. After completion of my degree, i was desperately searching for the job w...
^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the position of Software Engineer, and i am eager to join your office at my earl...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12652104565 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.712003867 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.2857142857 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274343847103 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923473996575 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793032813059 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1365747691 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407211245103 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.