Women sports are less popular do you think it's positive development or negative development?
Since, the beginning of mankind women are deprived of their basic amenities. They were confined in their homes and not allowed to participate in politics sports and economy. Although, in the modern world women are participating in every aspect of life, but appreciation of their work are less commendable as compared to men which has devastating impacts on the society and the individual as well. I will discuss in the below paragraphs.
Performing any duty or job with outstanding performance require confidence and social acceptance. Therefore, with less appreciation from the society it has many negative impacts. Firstly, women sports players with low esteem and positive energy it is impossible for them to face the potential challenges and gain fruitful results. Secondly, categorically it is detrimental for the society as for young girls there is no charm and career development in sports for them as a result playing sports would be there least preference which will lead to catastrophic failure.
Undermining the efforts of women athlete is provoking the idea of gender discrimination, of course which will lead to dire consequences. In other words, less appreciation to women sports will affect the women interest in every discipline of the country such as economy, politics and will stop them to participate equivalently to men as a result it will disrupt the economy of the country. It is evident that most of the country population consists of large numbers of women. Therefore, it is impossible for any country to make progress without the contribution of women.
To conclude, it is completely illogical that women are getting less appreciation merely on the basis of their gender. Secondly, it has dire consequences on the individual and on the nations as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, of course, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22569444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04175981275 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4940540363 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188765258079 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563767290441 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377039271065 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104395837561 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336233171508 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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