Dear sir or Madam,
I have recently seen an advertisement in local newspaper which is about a training course related to some new protocols in automation systems. Actually, I am writing to explain about the usage of this course for our company.
As I have worked in HMI section and I know how it is important to substitute the old protocols with the advanced ones, I resist on taking part in this course. I did my best to improve the situation in the company but I assure you that I can not do any better without having the opportunity to embrace new technologies. I know that there would be some trials and tribulations which I should cope with. If you accept to provide me with a grant to participate in this course, I will be able to keep the system up-to-date, as well as teaching these new methods to other employees.
The earliest you decide whether it is time for a big change, the better it will be for every parts of company as well as staff. Please do think long and hard to make a right decision.
I look forward to hearing your positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Pooneh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55778894472 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63149665151 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.835215529 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30643269873 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985945693058 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582142613583 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152162637923 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558733964817 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.