I am writing this letter to express my keen interest to join the ‘Performance of Digital Marketing in the global era’ course. I believe that this is top-notch digital marketing which would be fruitful for growth and expansion of the organization and wish to get your sanction for participating in this course.
In this concern to join this specific training course, I had seen the advertisement in the newspaper on the 21st of October. It is a ten-day intensive program which is going to held on 25th of the October on Raymond Resort. To take participate in this training course, prospector need to registration( inclusive material and accommodation) fees Rs.45000 before October 24. Under the organization of this course, More than 150 renowned speakers of the national and multinational companies are expected to participate in this course.
Since it is a resourceful course to learn digital marketing tactics that can enable us to enhance user engagement from all over the world. I expect you would allow me to and offers reimbursement for joining this course.
It is quite facilitated to engross the aspirant and empower to promote and expand our footstep in Industry and offers masterstroke tactics for cope up with rivals.
Thanks for considering this matter, Hope you will authorize it soon. I am looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Pawanchopra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...day intensive program which is going to held on 25th of the October on Raymond Resor...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ected to participate in this course. Since it is a resourceful course to learn dig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22522522523 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06422871302 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6881245593 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179640088455 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658666351559 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550198011866 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107054572517 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548323593273 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.