You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr. Stone,
I am writing you in regards an advertisement recently published in the internal magazine related to a training course that will be held next month.
I would like to mention that the training is related to how to deal with difficult conversations during commercial discussions. This course is going to be in one of our facilities in the North part of the city and consists in two full day sessions. Dates have not been confirmed yet because depends on the number of participants.
Also, It is important to mention that the course is going to be provided by external consulter company, therefore it represents costs, therefore your approval is needed. I know that the company is passing fro some difficulties in terms of budget on training, therefore I would suggest if the company can pay 100% of this training now and I can commit to reimburse up to 50% of the cost in 6 months from may monthly wage.
Finally, I would comment that I have heard that this coaching session had supported other areas to succeed in their negotiations on both sides internal and external. Since we are analyzing to bring more new customers, I do believe that by having refresh and right negotiations skills would be positioning me in a better situation to succeed in summing negotiations and support the growth strategy defined by our top management. You do not need to worry about my absence during those days, because I will prepare a plan to support you in case any emergency comes, of course, after training I will respond any urgent activity you may have.
Thank you some much for your support
Sincerely yours,
Philip
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...ded. I know that the company is passing fro some difficulties in terms of budget on...
^^^
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spond any urgent activity you may have. Thank you some much for your support Si...
^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your support Sincerely yours, Philip
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, so, therefore, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80071174377 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7529030949 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8586509559 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 76.5299724578 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288066060686 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960840624434 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764474842858 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166798709515 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791264804912 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.