Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
My opinion about blood sports is that people have been living this sport for many years. Many institutions have addressed this issue so far and it is still not banned in the world. I think humans are wrong. First of all, in ancient times blood sports are a part of our culture and conducting these activities during festival times. For example , bullfighting are common in some communities and people are likely to participate in such games to show their courage and make a feel of excitement among public, but in my point of view , it couldn't be considered as a normal sport because animals involving in these adventurous games are being injured or even killed.So blood sports should be banned.
Secondly using animal as a tool for entertaintment and gaining money from it is considered as an uncivilized activity and it violates animal protection act, because most of these animals are vulnerable.For instance , in case of bullfighting and cockfighting , animals get injured and finally died because of the poor negligence from the human side.Inorder to stop this cruelty towards animals , goverment should make strong laws for animal protection and give hard punishment to the rule violators.
To conclude blood sports should banned by laws and punishments because animals are also the part of the environment and they also have the right to live as same as humanbeings, so it is our respinsibility to make the world more eco- friendly and keep all creatures safe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81282014504 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.271598102 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.6 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495856833092 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215600113543 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134528544755 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34064863696 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239239002188 0.056905535591 420% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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