In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, real states businesses have been increasing exponentially in the last ten years. Thus, companies have been looking for a new space to build new homes in order to satisfy a huge demand for places to live. However, I disagree that companies due to the lack of space available in the cities must find places in the countryside affecting forest and habitat. Therefore, this essay I would explain why new houses cannot be building outside the city.
Firstly, a company building new houses in the countryside need to have a very plan detailed why is not possible to build new houses in the city. Some analysis has shown that by building small buildings facilitates enormous spacious to families and bring them a plenty of possibilities to be closed of shopping malls, schools, hospitals, and parks for their benefit. Thus, real estate companies must invest more time in searching places in the cities where they can attend the high home demand existing.
Secondly, it should not be forgotten companies have to be more aware about the environmental challenges occurred by the house builders outside the cities. Many of them have not getting proper approval from the government to perform those activities. There is a conflict in West Africa where builders-built buildings without government approvals. Thus, government needs to reinforce more their laws on this sector and push real estate company for law compliance
In summary, real states companies need to modify their plans for homes construction attending existing demand and look for solutions to continue building houses in the city avoiding areas outside the city. They must work together with local governments to stablish their requirements to build houses in the city without any concession to build houses in countryside areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20344827586 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74554877027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8218005248 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325087697195 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119184750491 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791962186714 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210878672363 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726752710197 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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