There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is one of the people’s requirements because it is the way of expressing their emotions and the language of their soul and today’s world holds various kinds of music such as traditional and international. Although traditional music is very important because of being part of the country’s culture, in my opinion, international music is more important in this global world because of its comprehensiveness.
On the one hand, traditional music is very critical because it is a common core value of people. It contains the history of the country. For example, in Turkey, we frequently sing anthem of İzmir when we come together. Because all of us know this anthem and it is part of our culture.
On the other hand, international music is crucial for people. People feel them more individual nowadays and want to have common things in all around the world. Since this kind of music is universal, it is a good way of socializing and meeting new people. In addition, music, which is one of the 7 fine arts, is a way to describe or understand beauty. Mozart and Michael Jackson are good examples of universal music which can be known by all over the world.
To conclude, music heals the soul and I think that is a good explanation as to why it is so essential for human being. I cannot think a world without music. Two types of music, traditional and international, are good examples of how music brings people together. While traditional music is momentous for people who value their culture and common national factors, I opine that, international music is more significant because it affects more people and it is widespread and creates more connectivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89788732394 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95416239924 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496478873239 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7315550242 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454164289507 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16027176207 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999208162259 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285840583156 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110263195135 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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