What are the benefits of genetically modified food? Are there any risks associated with these food items?
Population census has increased exponentially in the past decade and because of that the nourishment issue has become a challenge in the world. Modified genetic food has been one of the solutions that helped humanity in the past and nowadays. Despite the benefits of this type of food, it might have some risks which can affect human’s health. This will be shown by looking at the gain and threats associated with this food.
Although the term ‘ genetically modified’ might seem scary for some people, genetically modified food has made a revolution in the food industry. For example, in the past, the crops would be in a very bad condition due to the insects and fungal disease which affect the quality of food. Furthermore, the genetic modification has helped the plant to become more resistant to major diseases. In addition to that, the other benefit could be related to the food quality and size which has been improved by genetic modification. For these reasons, genetic modification could be powerful to improve our food.
On the other hand, there are some risks that could be related to genetic modification that could have an impact on human’s health. For instance, the long-term effect for these types of food might put people in possible risks which could be revealed in the coming years. Moreover, one of the drawbacks is that some of the animal kingdom species could be affected because they could not depend on the type of food that has been genetically modified. Therefore, genetically modified food could have a potential harm that affects our health and the animal life, too.
In summary, genetically modified food might have some risks as well as benefits. As a matter, I think that this type of food has improved our life and could be a growing idea around the world. However, further investigations should be done to avoid the risks related to genetically modified food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165822249 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471875 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4179885066 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36594072242 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15037651444 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818544749296 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262259148373 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435502678789 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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