Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?
Children's education has a large impact on their personality and behavior. In this matter, Schools are focusing more nowadays on projects and homework in order to make sure that all the concepts are well understood. However, The amount of homework has become overwhelming for both children and parents. Although this is the case, I disagree with allocating so much time to assist children to complete their homework. The reasons for that are related to how depending on parents could be affected how children are learned to be responsible and how they developed their creative mindset.
When the children are grown up, they will learn how to be dependent gradually and the role of their parents to educate them is quite fundamental. For instance, if the children get used to relying on their parents in doing their homework all the time, they will think that this should be the case for other responsibilities such as their duties at home. As a result, they will become more and more dependent in a way that might be so irritated with the community they live in. It might seem that homework is a silly thing to teach our little ones how to be independent, but it all could start from this point.
Furthermore, Any young child is born to be creative and exploring and when the children are left alone to do their task, they will figure out various creative ways to do so. For example, if a younger student is asked to perform a scientific experiment and his parents gave him the privilege to do it by himself, he will be more creative and this will develop his cognitive skills. Therefore, the children must have a space for creativity without depending on their parents to do all projects for them.
In summary, homework could be a good opportunity to teach the child how to be independent and creative which will affect their personality and character in the future. I totally disagree that parents should help their children to do their homework, and I am sure this will be beneficial for both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77428571429 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64844814014 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9040141108 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359452378612 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1509473829 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105725950629 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257521935429 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471508036429 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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