Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies, Do you agree or disagree

Research is a very powerful tool for the nation's development. Scientific Research in particular is considered as an important pillar for the health sector and economy as well. As a matter of fact I totally disagree that scientific research should be controlled and funded by the government. The reasons for that this type of research could be a minor priority for the government. Moreover, in developing countries, it might be impossible to fund such a type of research. This will be shown by looking at the lack of priority and the financial problems in the developing countries

Although the government has the economical budget for any sector , It has fundamental priorities such as education and health systems. Furthermore, most of the budget for the majority of the countries is dedicated to the ministry of defense. On the other hand, Scientific research could come at a low rank in the government's priority. For these reasons, companies and funding agencies should be part of the funding process.

In most developing countries, the government has a limited budget and should allocate it in the urgent ministries in the country. For example, the health care system is the most important one and it could be collapsed with the budget insufficiency. Therefore, allocating money for the research funding seems awkward in the poor countries. Although scientific research could be a powerful improvement way of developing countries, the limited budget makes this difficult to happen.

In summary, The governmental budget could have different priorities and this will have a huge impact on the way the research is funded. For that reason, I disagreed with putting scientific research only in the hand of the government. Funding agencies and private companies could make tremendous funding and as a result, the entire country will benefit from this improvement.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98964695054 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458193979933 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4690757709 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209293836384 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863501951791 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653081820324 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14089082368 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348248477361 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments