Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree with the people.. That problem is on the earth. It is a big problem.
My opinion the education that is very important humans. Some people not think that. I do not agree with them, because education is big and this doesn't end. Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Some people do not study at university. because the humans are very poor. Some family situation is rich and normal. They are the people who study at the university. Learning facts is not enough. We need more than more, because education and science does not wait.
Today education coming the high level. At technology is very important for humans. The technology now is coming very high level. For example Elon Musk's company opened the first electric car named Tesla and a few years ago they opened a new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very important for humans. Now I have opened other sections of technology, medicine, science and others.
In summary Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree with the fact that education is very essential for the entire society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78707224335 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49666608216 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414448669202 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8599712074 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7391304348 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4347826087 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.47826086957 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522782732948 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137274687357 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214244169527 0.0667982634062 321% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411290591444 0.151304729494 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.224079922947 0.056905535591 394% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.