Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree the people.. That problem have on the earth. It is a big problem.
My opinion the education that is very important humans. Some people not think that. I am not agree to them, becouse the education is big and this is doesn’t end. Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Some people do not study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family situation is rich and normal. They are people study the university. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education and sciense does not wait.
Today education coming the high level. At technology is very important for humans. The technology now is coming very high level. For example Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the name Tesla and fee years ago they are opened new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very important for humans. Now have new opened other section technology, medici, siciense and others.
Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree the people. That is shown we education very important.
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- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared Write a report for a university lecturer descr 89
- Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills I agree the people That problem have on the earth It is a big problem 56
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries many small local business are unable to compete Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities To what extent do you agree or 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
My opinion the education that is very im...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s. Some people not think that. I am not agree to them, becouse the education is big a...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...arning practical skills. Some people do not study universinty. becouse the human...
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Suggestion: Becouse
... Some people do not study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family ...
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...ot study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family situation is ...
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Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...university. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education ...
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Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...sity. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education and sc...
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... education and sciense does not wait. Today education coming the high lev...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...very high level. For example Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...xample Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the name Tesla and fee ye...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e opened new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very impor...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology, medici, siciense and others. Some people say that in all levels of ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9043062201 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49946767529 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502392344498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5392804163 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.25 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.45 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431116100337 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11893449017 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176789713434 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350799093054 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225884038584 0.056905535591 397% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.66 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
My opinion the education that is very im...
^^^
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s. Some people not think that. I am not agree to them, becouse the education is big a...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arning practical skills. Some people do not study universinty. becouse the human...
^^
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Becouse
... Some people do not study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family situation is ...
^^
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...university. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education ...
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Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sity. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education and sc...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... education and sciense does not wait. Today education coming the high lev...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...very high level. For example Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xample Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the name Tesla and fee ye...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e opened new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very impor...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology, medici, siciense and others. Some people say that in all levels of ed...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9043062201 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49946767529 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502392344498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5392804163 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.25 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.45 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431116100337 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11893449017 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176789713434 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350799093054 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225884038584 0.056905535591 397% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.66 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.