Companies should provide sport and social facilities for local communities. To what extend do you agree?
Employee satisfaction and engagement become one of the most important topics of the companies. They hold CHO (Chief Happiness Officer) to decrease regrettable turnover which results with additional cost and unhappiness of the others. It takes money and time to develop a new employee due to job requirements and company expectations. Providing sports and social facilities are good example of increasing employee satisfaction.
While people are getting older their social life outside of the job decreases. They do not have much energy or time to go out and meet new people. It is better to socialize with their own colleagues. It is easier and less time consuming. Companies can make some organizations to help employees to socialize. Another advantage of these activities is that employees can develop their skills. I saw a job posting which mentioned that they assigned a colleague to new employee to go out and socialize. They aim to decrease adapting duration of new employees and increase socializing among employees.
Sport is also a good way of touching employees and several options may be possible. Organizing team playing activities such as tournaments of basketball and football provides employee to build and to join a team. Team-work awareness may increase. They gain the habit of it. Team playing activities also provide socializing. Fitness clubs may be one of the options. It helps people to move and to use their muscles and to get rid of the tensions in their bodies. Yoga, plates and similar activities make healthier and relaxed people and warmer climate in the company.
As a result, social activities and sports create an opportunity to increase employee satisfaction and engagement. Engaged, satisfied and happy employees show better performance. Friendly environment instead of to formal environment creates warmer climate and results with happier and relaxed people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of increasing employee satisfaction. While people are getting older their social l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36120401338 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96605554343 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6777260133 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6956521739 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30434782609 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101131977703 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316324418232 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481591587885 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652349929694 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259564406864 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.92 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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