People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Health care costs are becoming higher especially with the spread of modern diseases. These are associated with the individual’s lifestyle that leads to waste abundant amounts of money to get their health back and cure illnesses such as; diabetes, high blood pressure, hormonal defects, and obesity surgeries. However, I agree that people who are ruining their health with their poor choices have to spend fees on health supplies………………..
Obesity has become a global phenomenon in recent decades and it is mainly caused by unhealthy habits that put people’s health at a higher risk of being diabetic, having a heart attack, having a stroke, or die at an early age. On the other hand, (nevertheless) (however), those who are confronting the disease accompanied with obesity are tending to spend money on medications. For example, a diabetic person should inject insulin(disposable) syringes multiple times a day to regulate the glucose level in the blood. Otherwise, it will lead to interminable issues that cost approximately 100 dollars for single-use syringes
On the other hand, there are a plethora of ways that contribute to optimal health without the risking of getting any sicknesses and preventing the potential of spending money on medications. These are adopting healthy habits like; eating food that is rich in vitamins and minerals to nourish the body, doing any physical activities on a daily basis, and having an adequate amount of sleep every night. Furthermore, hydrating the body by drinking eight glasses of water can get rid of many harmful cells in the body. Thus, it makes it clear that getting sick is preventable by creating a healthy lifestyle.
To sum up, metabolic diseases have become a widespread phenomenon but fortunately there are numerous ways to counter the problems caused by this issue.
health care treatments can be costly for curing different types of chronic diseases. Obesity was a good example of this. However, having a healthy lifestyle will impede the suffering of having any disease caused by unhealthy habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31212121212 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05758777065 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6224512229 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.214285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260137115857 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832789508119 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710865755771 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139469474981 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804318061222 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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