Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Other Feels that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays many industries have been transformed by the Internet in many ways, giving them the opportunity to explore new ways of thinking, working and automating where possible.
One of the industries that has been impacted is the Music Industry where the internet has been an important factor for this transformation. There are plenty of free music applications where people have unlimited music access by only subscribing to certain web providers.
Despite having legal music download providers, there are some illegal websites on the internet that allow people to download music without any restrictions and without providing any personal information (such as email, contacts, credit cards, etc.). Based on this, people think that illegal internet download sites impact negatively because the whole concept of having music access is affected and potentially increase damage to legal music providers.
Nowadays, illegal internet download sites become less due to the fact that music download providers offer access at very low costs. This kind of action protects the whole music industry itself and ensures that every single song listened to in their apps protects them, the artist and the whole music industry.
In my opinion, I would say that downloading music from a legal music application, the whole music industry is protected and will get more benefits rather than negative impacts. I do believe that users with music applications at low cost would definitely be avoiding illegal music downloading sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48085106383 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65535324583 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5576368314 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.111111111 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331800606558 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146543574226 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055860115229 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18095385363 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617065923686 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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