Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree ?
Wealthy nations have a lot of financial sources which make them stand in front of developed nations and as a a result, they should have a role in assisting other developing countries. I agree that wealthy nations must help poorer ones especially during natural crisis. The reasons for that could be explained by the lack of funding sources in developing countries and the contribution of wealthy nations to make developing countries even poorer.
Firstly, Developing countries have a majority of funding problems because they have limited sources which are allocated mainly for the main sectors such as health and education. Furthermore, natural disasters are burdened the developing countries and small issues such as rescuing people or helping them to find a safe shelter is become overwhelming. As an example for that is Tsunami which happened in Indonesia and caused widespread destruction. Many developed countries have provided different kind of aid and this what help Indonesia to overcome this crisis. Therefore, wealthy country should give a hand to all countries that experienced any kind of natural crisis.
On the other hand, it is known that wealthy countries are having a huge power and control over most of our world. As a result for that, the powerful countries are controlling natural resources such as oil, gas, and minerals as well. For instance, many of African resources are in the hand of wealthy nations and most of their financial resources such as gold and uranium are transferred to feed the wealthier countries economy. Consequently, developed country must help developing ones when natural disasters occurred.
In summary, The wealthy nations have a powerful role in helping developing countries to overcome the natural disasters and they should use all their resources to help them. Because they have the money to do so and they are kind of responsible of the poor condition that the developing countries have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27564102564 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78323264531 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0839566629 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261036332428 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111221797915 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770286217278 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182523144886 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580457117448 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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