Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies, Do you agree or disagree
Research is very powerful tool for the nations development. Scientific Research in particular is consider as an important pillar for health sector and economy as well. I totally disagreed that scientific research should be controlled and funded by the government. The reasons for that this type of research could be minor priority for the government, Moreover, in developing countries, it might be impossible to fund such type of research.
Although government has the economical budget for any country, It have fundamental priorities such as education, health system. Furthermore, most of the budget for the majority of the countries is dedicated to the ministry fo defense. On the other hand, Scientific research could come at low rank in the governmental’s priority. For this reasons, companies and funding agencies should be part of the funding process.
In most developing countries, the government has limited budget and should allocate it in the urgent ministries in the country. For example, health care system is the most important one and it could be collapsed with the budget insufficient. Therefore, allocating money for the research funding seems awkward in the poor countries. Even scientific research could be a powerful improvement way of developing countries, the limited budget make this difficult to happen.
In summary, The governmental budget could have different priorities and this will have a huge impact on the way how the research is funded. For that reasons, I disagreed to put the scientific research only in the hand of the government. Funding agencies and private companies could make tremendous funding and as a result, the entire country will benefit from this improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in particular, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40671641791 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02347271858 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485074626866 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4631065654 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202436659927 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087616190493 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776128497673 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1385508936 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417374534707 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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