News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. I think the very important problem for writers and readers.
My opinion the news stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. When I watching Tv news I fisrt listen and looking the picture and videos, and when I reading the newspaper I looking first pictures and after I read the newspaper. The pictures for me very important. The picture dor me realisim. Some people people when reading the newspaper first looking the picture, becaus they are believ the picture.
I think the picture is very important in the newspaper. The messengers need the first news and pictures.
I think the messengers are always using the pictures. The reader when the read the newspaper it is impressive to see their pictures. We are watching the news and reading the newspaper, essentially the pictures and videos. When the making the news need the pictures. My reason is interesting
when I was going to work I read the newspaper on the train and one passenger asked me last night score the Liverpool team, because he saw the picture on the newspaper. The picture is very important. When the making the news need the pictures. It is for humans very interesting and attractive.
News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Every time need the newspaper and Tv pictures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91153846154 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533681658 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353846153846 0.561755894193 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0685506238 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8095238095 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.380952381 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311960558235 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128843008367 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100413682897 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216923170938 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121899725512 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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