You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to
your employer. In your letter:
-Explain why you need this time off
-give details of when you want the time off
-say who can do your work when you are away
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to you to grant me a permission to take a vacation from work. As you know, I am studying master degree in Human Resources which not only broaden my professional skills but also develop my managerial competencies. I have been studying for the more than two years in order to gain the master.
I will be taking the exam on 21st of March so that I would like to have two weeks before the exam to prepare and I will return back on Sunday morning after the exam. According to our company policy, I am entitled to take two weeks consecutively to be deducted from annual leave balance.
Therefore, I will delegate my colleague David Peter to act as my backup during my absence because he has been working with me since I have commenced my job here, so I will hold a training session for him to undertake my tasks.
In the end, thank you for your attention to this matter, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Mina Michael
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...s before the exam to prepare and I will return back on Sunday morning after the exam. Accor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50590415005 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9078482863 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153092238348 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781037803129 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889879767674 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105578261495 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896306792303 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.