You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager and say
– Why would you like to attend this course?
– Why would it be beneficial for you and the company?
– Suggest how to arrange time for it.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirits. It is my immense pleasure to inform you that IBM limited is going to organise an imperative short-term training programme in CAD designing and I want to attend the same. The reason behind to attend this course is that I want to enhance my technical skills as well as productivity. However it is an arduous course but I will do it.
Now let me tell you the benefits of this course, If I would complete this course then we can increase not only our productivity but also improve our quality of products. Last but not least, another vital thing I would like to mention that It is a weekend programme so I will not take any leave from office. Even I will do extra work on weekdays.
I hope you (will) consider my request and give me permission to attend the training programme. I will be very thankful to you.
Yours faithfully
Jai
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...chnical skills as well as productivity. However it is an arduous course but I will do i...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51595517868 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5265647078 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280489803517 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965300012269 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487032515351 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177989697139 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00859858369283 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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