An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?
In this contemporary era, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of overweight adolescents in the world due to processed food and a sedentary lifestyle. This essay will elaborate on the main factors contributing to plumpness and thereby elicit some feasible solutions in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost cause of heaviness is junk food. Fast food contains a large number of additives, saturated fats, and sugars which is detrimental for health. Moreover, canned food outlets are ubiquitous everywhere and these types of foods are easily available in the school canteen. In addition, in this fast-paced life, both parents are working and they do not have time to cook hygienic food at home rather than parents often buy dinner from outside. This calorie-rich diet is making kids obese. However, these problems can be resolved by teaching children about the benefits of healthy food in life. Apart from that, the government should embark on awareness programs especially for adolescents and banning or imposing a heavy tax on fast food and fizzy drinks. Last but not least, junk food should be replaced by homemade food, fruits, milk, and juices.
The second vital cause of heavyweight is a sedentary lifestyle. It is an undeniable fact that the use of computers and T.V is increasing in adolescents and they spend most of their time in watching T.V or playing video games on electronic gadgets. This technological advancement has reduced the level of physical activity in this specific age group. This issue can be solved by encouraging kids to do physical exercise. Parents can take their children to park to encourage playing with friends. Furthermore, schools can add sports in their curriculum to maintain physical fitness in their students.
To conclude, it is clear that the main cause of overweight is unhygienic eating food and not enough physical activities. This ailment can be prevented and treated by healthy eating habits and physical exercises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, apart from, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78756847947 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0695802225 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177227940548 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053140912496 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340710799868 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912345860622 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477060904814 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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