You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop
1-Ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
2-Ask what the prices are
3- how long they will be able to hold the goods
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest to buy some gadgets, which are recently released in the market, from your shop branch in the town.
On the website of your store, the new Microsoft tablet “Surface Pro 4” in three models are being advertised as a new release. When I tried to purchase two tablets online, the website is gone through an error. Please advise if they are currently available at your shop! If both models need an advance reservation, please inform me also with the delivery period after the booking is made.
There are three different models of the tablet, and their prices are fluctuating from shop to another. I would therefore ask that you list down the price for each model for my further information, and that you note my membership for any available discount on the gadgets.
Recently, I am outside the country for business trip with my company, and I may be away for two weeks. So that, I need your advice on the maximum duration of storage for any item that I may buy from your shop. It will be very helpful to arrange the full payment, if there are extra charges.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: ADVANCE_PLANNING[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'reservation'.
Suggestion: reservation
...le at your shop! If both models need an advance reservation, please inform me also with the deliver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72511848341 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46616783349 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0923130714 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139594605219 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450840036147 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367392217751 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682814372138 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373695350427 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.