You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home Write a letter to the manager of the shop In your letter say which electrical goods you want ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay explain how y

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...lives in that area. I am writing to you in regards to find the possibility of buying a certa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egards to find the possibility of buying a certain electrical good that is only a...
^^
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...ion I thought it would be best to order before hand, so that I could make that long distanc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...th the certainity of having the goods I am wishing to. I am looking for the special edi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...igh boost mic integrated in it. it also have the option of recording for DVDs and Bl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'featured'.
Suggestion: featured
...g for DVDs and BluRays. Upon all it has feature of connecting to ones computer and twea...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...pon all it has feature of connecting to ones computer and tweak the music tracks. ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...tions of payment available at your end. if I could pay through a credit card I wil...
^^
Line 6, column 221, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ough a credit card I will be pleased as i will be able to avail the EMI. Once ...
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Line 8, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lunch time which would be around 1 pm on Wednesdays or Thurdays. my work place is...
^^
Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...around 1 pm on Wednesdays or Thurdays. my work place is 10 km away from your plac...
^^
Line 10, column 27, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...to manage. I will be looking forward to hear from you. Your efforts in this matter i...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3187250996 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40605811365 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7355883019 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3846153846 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217334394229 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752138639745 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679474903242 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105948114592 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715599539256 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.