I am writing the letter regarding a seminar on " Advancement in robotic technology", and I would like to get some more information for the same.
I work for one of the leading car manufacturing company, as a automation engineer and my company recommended me for this seminar, therefore, I want some related information from your side.Firstly, As per visa application requirement, I need exact date for the seminar, so that I can book my return flight tickets. Secondly, Information about the duration of the event, also accommodation related details,like candidate need to arrange his or her own accommodation or it is covered in the seminar fee it self. Above all of the I would like to know the total amount needs to pay in US dollars, so I can inform to my manager and finance department.
I will appreciate if your provide me all the mentioned information as soon as earlier possible, so that I can start visa process.
Please let me know if your want any information from my side.
Looking forward for your quick response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...some related information from your side.Firstly, As per visa application requirement, I...
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...vent, also accommodation related details,like candidate need to arrange his or her ow...
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
...ion or it is covered in the seminar fee it self. Above all of the I would like to know ...
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Suggestion: all the
...vered in the seminar fee it self. Above all of the I would like to know the total amount n...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...n the seminar fee it self. Above all of the I would like to know the total amount nee...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98369565217 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17051914285 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3033655927 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235093301273 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087347871951 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711178037402 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108334397518 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915938993326 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.