You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost
Dear Sir,
My name is Saud and I am presently working as a Solution Architect Satellite business for “ABC Consulting” therefore I wanted to inquire about the seminar on network design for satellite networks which is being held in Singapore.
Although I have attended short courses on network design in the past however I believe this seminar will provide in-depth knowledge to design cost-effective networks thus increasing the profitability of the company. Since the advert published in the newspaper did not mention the complete details hence I wanted to find out detailed information about this seminar. May I know the duration, keynote speakers and cost of the program? Additionally, I would also like to know if the accommodation would be covered or it has to be arranged by the participants.
Furthermore please let me know if there is a discount on the group participation as some of my colleagues would be interested to join this course. Lastly, I couldn’t find any registration link on your website so kindly help to provide that to too.
Looking forward to your response so that I can do advance bookings.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...to be arranged by the participants. Furthermore please let me know if there is a discou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17989417989 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15973591 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9053743716 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174918875978 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597293805737 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483244237218 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810623284095 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730744101652 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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