You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer.
Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp.
In your letter:
Explain what sort of job you would like to do
Describe your personality
Say what experience and skills you have
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Paul and I am writing this letter to express my interest to work with you at your summer camp. Being having an energetic personality, I can utilize my knowledge of outdoor activities to a large extent.
I am interested in doing job at your campus. I would find myself suitable for outdoor activities particularly Gardening and Mud Sculpturing that are mentioned as part of outdoor activities. I can teach young children regarding these activities effectively. Therefore, I want to apply as a trainer for your outdoor activity session.
I am an enthusiastic person who can easily entertain children and youngsters; also, I have the patience to work in scorching summers because I believe that it is important for our young generation to learn other than academics, such as sports and DIY.
It is pertinent to mention here that I did a six months course in Gardening and mud modeling. Moreover, I have done part-time job in The Little Angel School, Gojra where I taught classes of mud modeling and flowers species. My experience and knowledge would supplement me to perform my job at you summer camp efficiently.
I look forward to receiving your response regarding my interest in the job.
Yours faithfully,
John Paul.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...entioned as part of outdoor activities. I can teach young children regarding thes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04245283019 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9374637845 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5222678051 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28700061884 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939443680702 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647978236249 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143052872931 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422900014692 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.