You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write:-
- what job you would like to apply
- what companies are you looking for
- why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
this is in correspondence to seek a job opportunity outside India through your employment agency.
To begin with, I am passionate about software Designing, and have been working as software engineer since 3 years. Therefore, I am keen to work vividly as a software developer.
Additionally, companies providing services related to computer’s application development are preferable as they suit my job profile.
Furthermore, working outside of my native country is of paramount importance to me as this will not only boost my career, but also provide me the opportunities to be independent and attain high salary. Moreover, I love travelling and experiencing new cultures and this will enable both of these.
Look forward to a prompt reply on the receipt of this letter.
Yours Faithfully,
Jamie Loet
Comments
Dear Sir, I have read your…
Dear Sir,
I have read your article on foreign job vacancy which leads me to contact you.
I am a senior mortgage underwriter, working in Tata Consulting Service where I enjoy my work. However, I am looking for my growth and my designation is already related to US mortgage underwriting hence would like to apply for the same.
I have good knowledge of the US Mortgage Industry and 6+ years of experience in the zone hence, I would like to work in a company where I can keep utilizing my abilities and awareness about the task.
I want to work in overseas because the job I am doing is for US and really want to have depth information which will help me for my better future and which will help me for my better future and which will grow my organization in top level.
Awaiting for you response with some of the firms where I can apply.
Yours faithfully,
Chandni V.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, this is in correspondence to seek a job ...
^^^
Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter. Yours Faithfully, Jamie Loet
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45038167939 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28155500156 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.740458015267 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8873731519 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849741095363 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351846551003 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231802309406 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489865395138 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167996634855 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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