You and some friends ate a meal at some restaurant to celebrate a special occasion

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at some restaurant to celebrate a special occasion

Dear Sir,
I would like to compliment the delicious food and quick services demonstrated by your restaurant on my visit.

I have often heard about the eatery through words of mouth, but visited it for the first time last Saturday. Many of my friends accompanied me to celebrate a special occasion.

A few days back I got matriculated to a prestigious college, and my friends were constantly asking for a dinner treat on this achievement.
Initially, we ordered a king-sized, thin-crust pizza, in the main course and some drinks to enjoy the delicacy. To our surprise, not only the pizza was delectable, but also it was served within a couple of minutes. Besides this, the chocolate chip ice cream with some caramel and nuts was awesome. We have never experienced its texture, the fine taste, and the flavor before.
I appreciate the services and the toothsome food catered by your restaurant and will surely recommend it to my acquaintances.
I would be pleased to meet you on my next visit.
Thanking You,
David Joe

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91954022989 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86813279987 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3793621596 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157393181293 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539291721247 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493650599458 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584562241927 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230925649357 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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