Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have asmall accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.You need to explain the following:1. When and where you hired it?2. Describe how the accident hap

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Kumar Sampad and I am customer of your car rental services. I am writing this letter to report a minor accident happened with your car which was hired on yesterday.

The model no. of the vehicle is Audi Q7 SUV, which was rented from your Danforth branch with a booking reference no. of AXCV1234. I was travelling from Danforth to Sacrborough to meet with some of my friends living there. However, as it is winter now, the roads were snow-covered and driving becomes a bit challenging in this harsh weather. Despite this unwelcoming weather for driving, I was driving confidently and carefully. Unfortunately, the driver of another vehicle who was just after me on the road, hit me from the back while I slowed down my car on a traffic signal at the round-about near downtown. I know it is neither my fault, nor his, but the backside of my vehicle got dented a bit. Luckily, we were not injured that much thanks to the seatbelts of your Audi. However, after reaching at Scarborough, I made a visit to a local repairing shop to check any further damage happend to the car. We were fortunate enough, there was no other issues diagnosed by the mechanic.

The report from the repairing shop as well as the bill for diagnosis is attached for your understanding. I expect a reduction from my renting charge as part of consolidation.

I look forward to your reply very soon.

Yours faithfully,

Kumar S Sampad.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Danforth) must be used with a third-person verb: 'branches'.
Suggestion: branches
...UV, which was rented from your Danforth branch with a booking reference no. of AXCV123...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... bit. Luckily, we were not injured that much thanks to the seatbelts of your Audi. H...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75766311981 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0379181568 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8125 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092131013318 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285528760875 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308929805748 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631228573151 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350369923772 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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