Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head
teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to
go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
Say why you would like to go on the trip
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask other questions about the trip
Hello sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to go with my child on school trip as he is not too mature and won't understand rules that he has to follow.
I have a vacation on my work so I would like to join school trip with the students. If I am coming then I can arrange food for students as well as make sure full attention on all students. As I did research about Canada online and I found some eminent places to visit and do enjoyment there. During the trip, I entertain all students as I am comedian.However, if you need any kind of assistance, I am there to help you.
As I research on web and I have a few question about the trip. my primary question is how long we have to stay there and do we have travel insurance with us?. one more last concern about accommodation. is it already booked house or apartment for all students or after reach there, we have to find?
I hope you will understand my situation and I will attain positive
reply from your side.
Faithfully
Kishan Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello sir, I am writing to inform you that I would ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nderstand rules that he has to follow. I have a vacation on my work so I would ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...entertain all students as I am comedian.However, if you need any kind of assistance, I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of assistance, I am there to help you. As I research on web and I have a few qu...
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Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'few questions'.
Suggestion: few questions
... As I research on web and I have a few question about the trip. my primary question is ...
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Suggestion: My
...d I have a few question about the trip. my primary question is how long we have to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...d do we have travel insurance with us?. one more last concern about accommodation. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... more last concern about accommodation. is it already booked house or apartment fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or after reach there, we have to find? I hope you will understand my situation ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my situation and I will attain positive reply from your side. Faithfully Kis...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reply
...ituation and I will attain positive reply from your side. Faithfully Kishan P...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur side. Faithfully Kishan Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26943005181 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56049783409 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3418427925 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9090909091 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168935559998 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544634401527 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732994580084 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972708841539 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079898668876 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.