Essay Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the last century, environmental problems has become increasingly worse.
the major causes are the phenomenon of human activity. I opine that,
augment the price of fuel is not only the way to solve environmental
problems but everybody should know their individual responsibility to solve
the problems. I partially agree with the statement.
To commence with, human activity plays an vital role for increasing the
environment pollution and other problems: global warming, flooding, disease
etc. However, government should increase the fuel price because of that,
they will use public transport instead of cars and other vehicles. Other
advantage is when people stops using their own car they will start public
transport in result of reduce the carbon dioxide emission which is
responsible for global warming and climate change. Government should take
responsible steps to save environment from those problems such as if
someone find to do environment degradation then government should pay a
huge amount of charge or 6 month prison. It is the best way to solve those
kind of problems. we will attain good amount of pure oxygen.
On the other hand, everyone has their own choice to use own car or public
transport. Even if government raise the price of fuel they will not use
public transport because they think differently that if they will use
public transport, they will not reach at job location or other location on
time. If they have car they will go easily without any problem. There are
lots of problems increasingly day by day for instance, over-population,
criminals, deceases etc. Only increase the gasoline price is the not only
the best way, individual person think towards the environment. For solving
problems, government or other NGOs organize camping towards the
environment and they have to travel all over the country and explain what
happen if they use more cars and other vehicles.
In a nutshell, according to me, we all have our individual responsibility
to save our earth by not doing bad activity towards the environment.
Everybody's know that, health is wealth. If environment is better then we
are better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...blems has become increasingly worse. the major causes are the phenomenon of huma...
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Suggestion: The
...r individual responsibility to solve the problems. I partially agree with the st...
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... To commence with, human activity plays an vital role for increasing the enviro...
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Suggestion: Responsible
...the carbon dioxide emission which is responsible for global warming and climate change. ...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...om those problems such as if someone find to do environment degradation then gove...
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Suggestion: Huge
...adation then government should pay a huge amount of charge or 6 month prison. It ...
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Suggestion: Kind
...n. It is the best way to solve those kind of problems. we will attain good amount...
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Suggestion: We
...way to solve those kind of problems. we will attain good amount of pure oxygen....
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Suggestion: Transport
... own choice to use own car or public transport. Even if government raise the price of ...
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Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to use own car or public transport. Even if government raise the price of fuel they...
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Suggestion: Time
...at job location or other location on time. If they have car they will go easily w...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... location or other location on time. If they have car they will go easily witho...
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Suggestion: The
...e the gasoline price is the not only the best way, individual person think towar...
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Suggestion: Happen
...ll over the country and explain what happen if they use more cars and other vehicle...
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Suggestion: To
...l have our individual responsibility to save our earth by not doing bad activit...
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Suggestion: Are
...th. If environment is better then we are better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45977011494 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81692457783 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9116595513 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245349818811 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777616468366 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057205121323 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665218973965 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602364766624 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.