Dear Sir/Madam,
I am gsrgd dgjodifg,mother of sfgs sfsfds. I am very pleased to hear from my daughter that you are organizing a field trip for the students of your school to African safari. I would like to accompany my child for the trip, which helps me to make our relationship stronger and as well as I can take care of her.
As I am working as a teacher, I have lot of experience in the field trips.so I can help the children by explaining the evolution of wild life and the vegetation etc. I want to about the booking details of hotel and flight.
Yours sincerely
Vgjigj sgnsdfgh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mother
Dear Sir/Madam, I am gsrgd dgjodifg,mother of sfgs sfsfds. I am very pleased to h...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir/Madam, I am gsrgd dgjodifg,mother of sfgs sfsfds. I am very pleased to hear f...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 483.0 937.175257732 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 206.0 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43119266055 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76020270325 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 127.690721649 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688073394495 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 141.3 290.88556701 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1723160596 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205207240049 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780051806188 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803513260452 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137755973025 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948836787886 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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