YOUR COMPANY RECENTLY USED A HOTEL FOR AN IMPORTANT MEETING. THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH FACILITIES IN THE MEETING ROOM.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE HOTEL MANAGER: IN YOYUR LETTER
- GIVE DETAILS ABOUT THIS MEETING
- DESCRIBE PROBLEM WITH THE MEETING ROOM FACILITIES
- SEE WHAT YOU WANT THE MANGER TO DO
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry martin, senior sales manager of CVS organisation. Yesterday, we had an official meeting with some of our international clients at your renowned hotel. Unfortunately, we were totally dissatisfied by the services provided by you and I am writing this letter to complain about the same.
Let me explain you in detail. Actually, it was a big proposal meeting with ten of our international clients and we booked the big conference room for our thirty members and we also mentioned all our requirements in advance. Although, the meeting had to start at 1.pm, we booked that room for complete day to ignore any hassle.
The meeting started on time, the refreshments offered by you were very tasteful. However, the problem began when the air conditioner stopped working automatically. Anyhow we managed that but when the power-point projector did not start that made us helpless to explain our project and consequently we had to cancel the meeting. it was an embarrassing moment for all of us, as our clients returned back empty-handed.
To compensate for this terrible service, I request you to book another meeting room from my earlier booking itself.I will reschedule meeting with my clients. I hope you still believe in word-of-mouth advertisements and maintaining goodwill of your hotel by valuing your customers.
Hope to get a positive revert from you as soon as possible.
Your sincerely
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18376068376 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06165788349 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7569158914 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257257712264 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775070123805 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620017257655 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127859389066 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741874107376 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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