Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Technology has become an indispensable part of human's life. Our day starts with technology and ends with the same. It is commonly believed by many that control of our lives has been taken by technology. However, some people defend this by stating that many positive developments in varied aspects of lives has occurred due to technology. This essay examines both these views and present my opinion about the same.
To begin with, there are some bad effects of technology in our life. WE have made ourselves so much dependent on technology that we could not survive without it. Technology has affected not only our physical but also psychological health. For example, now a days, we hardly remember any contact number however, in our grandparents time, people could easily feed their brain with the contacts of all the near ones and dear ones. The over utilization of technology has negative effects to our physical health also. We seldom travel by walk since the development of motorized vehicles or we always prefer escalators and elevators over stairs, so this way we have made our bodies more lethargic and comfortable. And it is because of this, our body exhaust more quickly and we are left with no power.
However, the benefits that we enjoy through latest technology are also inevitable. Technology has made our research work more easier and attractive. For example, exploring the beautiful life above the sky and even under the water would have been possible only due to modern technology. Moreover, technology has helped us in medical field as well. For instance, the preventions and cures of several epidemic diseases has saved the lives of millions of people around the world, which could not be possible without technology.
In my opinion, using a technology to some extent is advantageous. Like a very famous proverb, Excess of everything is bad'. WE should use technology for new inventions and research work and learning purposes but not only for making our life excessively comfortable. without technology, we cannot experience development.
In conclusion, these days, technology has expanded in every field of life such as education, health, entertainment. Although, it is undeniable that technology has taken control over our lives by making us more dependent on it and also affecting our mental and physical strength. However, technology is an essential cause for development, we cannot overrule its benefits over few side effects. As per my opinion, technology is a significant part of our lives and has provided us myriad positive developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17985611511 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85402331952 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52278177458 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.884141591 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.68 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200568947977 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638815414142 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437645827096 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124205478577 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591776907203 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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