In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
It is undebatable that there has been a tremendous developement in the agriculture sector. Most of the work and processes has been mechanised. There is hardly any agricultural work left to be done manually. Inspite of such wonderful developments, a major amount of population around the globe is still hungry for food. This essay examines the primary reasons for this including improper distribution and storage system and natural calamities. Further, This essay will provide some solutions for this issue.
The primary reasons for the shortage of food is natural disasters. Every year, most of the nations around the world faces one or the other disaster such as earthquake, flood or draught. Such natural catastrophes exploits the production and thus farmers increases the price of remaining crops or vegetables. In short, the inflated rates of food due to natural issues makes it unaffordable to huge population. For example, in the year 2016, fifteen hundred tons of potatoes production got spoilt due to flood, consequently the price of potatoes risen ten times more. Another major reason is that there is improper storage and distribution of fresh food. Large stocks of food get rotten while they are stored for too long due to faulty distribution channel and later such food is disposed in rivers and grounds.
However, as like many other problems, these problems can be resolved by considering some simple methods such as proper distribution channel that tells what to send, where to send and how much to send. This way the food may not get wasted and be consumed by needful people. Another possible solution is to be prepared for natural calamities so that we do not have to inflate the prices of our crops. Some simple solution to this is to be well prepared for at least two year production using cold storage facilities so that if there is an unmanageable event occurs, we have enough food for popultion.
In conclusion, food is the basis of any living body's survival, every person need food. In this modern world, we are equipped with world's best machineries and technologies to support the production. However, there is still problem of hunger around the world. The two major reasons for this problem are inappropriate storage and distribution system and nature disaster. To mitigate this problem, we should focus on better storage and distribution system and cold storage facilities to store fresh food safely for long years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09452736318 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74102715611 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532338308458 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7553876367 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0909090909 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187481637096 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628555882564 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608170553764 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131222702095 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693097879827 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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