Your friend is coming over to stay with you However you will be away on vacation for a month Write him her a letter In your letter say how to get the keys to your flat Explain how to operate the equipment in the flat and suggest a few places of interest t

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Your friend is coming over to stay with you. However, you will be away on vacation for a month. Write him/her a letter. In your letter: say how to get the keys to your flat, Explain how to operate the equipment in the flat, and suggest a few places of interest to visit.

Hi Georgey,

I hope you're doing well. I received your letter and I was thrilled to know that you will be staying with me for the next three months. Unfortunately, I won't be in town for a month as I am travelling to my native place.

Although I'm not at home, you can stay there as long as you want. I'll inform my apartment security guard to give you the spare key once you arrive. He'll ask you for your ID card, so carry that with you. And entering my house is not that easy, you'll need door pin number to access my house which I will text you once you reach there.

One very important information which I want to tell you is that, my air conditioner is not working. Don't worry! I have a portable cooler at home which you can use. Just remember to refill the water in the chamber whenever it gives a red alert. You can even keep the windows open and enjoy the cool breeze.

Since you are in town, why don't you visit the St. Cathedral church near to my apartment. You'll love that place! Not only because you will get some spiritual time there, but also it's Christmas season and they have the best celebration in town. So go ahead and enjoy the Christmas even if I am not around; and don't forgot to visit the snow castle. It's amazing!

I can't wait to see you and enjoy your stay alone until I get back.

Warm regards,
Sruthy

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Hi Georgey, I hope youre doing well. I received your letter and ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...elling to my native place. Although Im not at home, you can stay there as long...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...you can stay there as long as you want. Ill inform my apartment security guard to g...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: HELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'he'll'?
Suggestion: He'll
...give you the spare key once you arrive. Hell ask you for your ID card, so carry that...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...And entering my house is not that easy, youll need door pin number to access my house...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...nt information which I want to tell you is that, my air conditioner is not working...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...hat, my air conditioner is not working. Dont worry! I have a portable cooler at home...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l breeze. Since you are in town, why dont you visit the St. Cathedral church near...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
... Cathedral church near to my apartment. Youll love that place! Not only because you g...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat place! Not only because you get some spiritual time there, but also its chris...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ebration in town. So go ahead and enjoy the christmas even if I am not around and dont forgot...
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Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e christmas even if I am not around and dont forgot to visit the snow castle. Its am...
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...isit the snow castle. Its amazing! I cant wait to see you and enjoy your stay alo...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alone until I get back. Warm regards, Sruthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24803149606 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15319780153 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1257530029 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4375 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264929288122 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904243985547 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758421807485 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164557890701 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861384190994 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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