Governments have adopted various methods to reduce crime across the globe. While some people argue that long-term jail sentences are the best option to lower crime rates, others opine that there are different ways to tackle this issue. This essay will discuss both these views in detail; and provide evidence on why I support the notion that using alternative measures is the ideal way to decrease crime.
Longer jail sentence has been a common punishment used by the judicial since decades. This considered as an effective method as releasing criminals early could be a threat to the public. Although they are given various training like anger control therapy and mind rejuvunation techniques, majority of them return back to their illegal activities once they are released from the jail. They are not only risk to the people's life, but can also influence youngsters to follow their path. Hence, longer jail sentences of prisoners mitigates the risks of damage to the society.
However, there are better ways to alleviate the illegal activities in a society. One of such methods is that the government should provide public awareness in order to lower criminality. These sessions will mould the citizen's minds to adhere to the laws and regulations, which in turn can decrease the crime rate. Other than this, if an individual is found to possess a criminal behaviour, then they should be taken to a counsellor or a psychiatrist before they commit an offense. For instance, when a child is suspected of being influenced to carry out activities like theft, smuggling, or a fight, then the parents should immediately taken an expert opinion to bring the child's mind-set to the right direction. Thus, using these preventive measures can the bend the graph curve of crime rate downwards.
In conclusion, although many people believe that longer jail sentence is the best way to decrease crime, there are people who oppose this ideology. I reiterate that there are other ways to reduce the crime rate; which includes educating the public and providing counselling to people who are prone to develop criminal behaviour
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK
Message: Use simply 'return'.
...juvunation techniques, majority of them return back to their illegal activities once they a...
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...the jail. They are not only risk to the peoples life, but can also influence youngsters...
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minds adhering'.
Suggestion: minds adhering
... These sessions will mould the citizens minds to adhere to the laws and regulations, which in t...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11527377522 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57886590918 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3733153333 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327123585404 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985768235657 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108994749219 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21756215103 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140960102096 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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