Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection with the advert that you had given in the Australian magazine this week, seeking a full-time care-taker for your six year old child for six months.
I would like to apply for this position as I have been looking for a job with an accommodation since my previous company closed temporarily for major restructuring work. I have to return to the company after it re-opens, tentatively after six months, as I have signed a contract for two year service with the company.
Apart from my own personal reason, employing me will be beneficial for you as I am a paediatric nurse by profession. I understand that your child has lexical disability and I guarantee you that I can improve her communication ability within six months time.
Meanwhile, I have been volunteering at a child care centre whenever I get time to support children with speaking disability. I am doing these kind of activities as I am fond of children. Hence, If you give me this job then I assure you that I will take care of your child well.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
...n as I have been looking for a job with an accommodation since my previous company closed tempor...
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mporarily for major restructuring work. I have to return to the company after it ...
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...en with speaking disability. I am doing these kind of activities as I am fond of children....
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, then, well, while, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91370558376 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98525497657 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0231679158 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389086060313 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128514230412 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910281660466 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192046780222 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901067377265 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
I recently show your post in Perth newspaper on the date of 15 January 2021.I came here to meet my uncle and apart from that, I am searching for a job that I would manage my further expanse.
Recently, I came here from my hometown Ahmedabad,India to meet my near ones and know different cultures and religions of other country.However,as per your magazine post, I have had huge experience in maternity care,and I started this work at the age of 15 at a small kid orphanage club.On those days, I cared for many kids like their guardians.I had a gold experience of about 7 years in the kid's orphanage club.About my past experience, I cared almost 200child and I got the award from our government.I am fresh in the modern country and I did not communicate for routine work.Due to the above reason, you get help from me and I will get some revenue.So, I will not burden my uncle.
Last five days, I felt so boring and disappointed because I thought that I don't get any work from this modern country. So finally, you will get my message, and hope I get positive feedback from you.