Travelling overseas has become comparatively affordable nowadays. Although this allows people to explore various tourist places and visit countries for job hunting, this can lead to increase in the crime rates and spread of communicable diseases. This essay will discuss in details of the benefits and drawbacks related to overseas travel accessibility to people due to low-cost flying.
The greatest advantage of cheaper flights is that it allows people to go for sight-seeing outside their native countries. People from any financial background can not only explore these beautiful places, but can also make travelling a source of income through travel content creation. For example, Drew Brinsky, although hails from a poor family, became rich by creating YouTube videos. Apart from this, budget airlines have opened doors for job-seekers. Unlike the earlier days, where getting recruited for job abroad was almost impossible, this cost-cutting in airline tickets have paved way for people to fly overseas and stay there for a short term until they get a job placement.
However, the decrease in the cost of flying has its drawbacks. The main challenge of this increased accessibility of travelling is that, there is high-risk of increase in the crime rate. Although the normal security will be carried out in the airports, budget airlines security measures are compromised many times, due to which people finds multiple ways to smuggle illegal products through airport. The Deccan article had recently published a write-up stating evidence on the safety issues of low-cost flights. Another issue is that the number of travelers have increased enormously due to the affordable travel charges, which in turn can be a source of spreading infectious diseases. The recent corona virus pandemic is the best example for this, as it was proven to be an outbreak from crowded budget airline travelers.
In conclusion, travelling overseas is much easier now as the flight charges have come down drastically. Even though this increases the tourism and provide job opportunities to people across the globe, this can lead to increase in illegal acts and cause infectious disease outbreak.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40524781341 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75531644931 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603498542274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0820446201 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227887898728 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085627827418 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600728988481 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157323784229 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496889560377 0.056905535591 87% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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