Junk foods have become increasingly popular nowadays. People can easily avail fast foods from anywhere in the current era compared to earlier days. While some people perceive that accessibility to these fast foods has some benefits, I personally believe that it has more drawbacks.
Few people argue that there are advantages of having easier access to junk foods. The main reason for this is that the demand for street food among youngsters has been increasing consistently. Therefore, having junk food outlets such as KFC, Pizza hut or McDonalds within their proximity or fast food delivery system satisfies these young people's desire. Other than this, not only street markets are successful establishments due to its popularity, but also opens doors for employment, which in turn contributes to the economical development of an individual as well as the society as a whole.
However, there are major drawbacks of having fast food which outweigh its benefits. The key issue is its detrimental effect on the health of the public. Increased consumption of fast food can lead to major ailments, for instance, obesity, diabetes, maternity complications, cardiac diseases and so on. Other than this, it can impact the mental well being of people negatively. Studies have shown that people having substantial amount of junk foods are prone to develop depression, insomnia, relationship issues and other psychiatric illnesses.
In conclusion, while some people believe that having greater access to fast food is advantageous, I believe it has more disadvantages. This is because the risks of developing physical as well as mental health issues is very high among population who consume fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...yment, which in turn contributes to the economical development of an individual as well as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37078651685 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8630748023 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8578358159 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27663262013 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105194256465 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575557661163 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185307650467 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145038179973 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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