Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring in to your notice an error in the article about Covid 19 which you published in the Australian travel magazine on last Sunday.
It was written in the article that it is not mandatory for overseas travelers to stay on quarantine once they reach their desired destination. I vehemently oppose this statement mentioned in the write-up as it is absolutely necessary for everyone to maintain isolation post -travel to prevent spread to Corona virus infection.
Meanwhile, It is paramount that a journalist state only scientific facts about such crucial health-related information, especially in a popular magazine like yours. This is not only important for public-health awareness, but also for the company to stay out of unnecessary legal issues for publishing contents that could create havoc among citizens.
I would recommend your team to look into this matter in detail; as well as educate your journalist to consider the opinion of an established physician or refer authorized website like WHO or CDC before publishing any healthcare related educational contents.
I request you to kindly consider this letter and do the needful.
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
...ment mentioned in the write-up as it is absolutely necessary for everyone to maintain isolation post...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34183673469 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97302796017 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2588437493 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217417160176 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914588347194 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090450755708 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125424102082 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113041951328 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.