Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to share my opinion regarding your proposal to sponsor either the children's football team in Abu Dhabi or to conduct an open-air musical event.
The plan to support the children's football club will be an ideal option. This will be beneficial to the children not only because they will get the adequate resources for preparation and travel, but also because it will give them an opportunity to take part in international league which will be a huge achievement for both the participants as well as the nation.
Furthermore, the plan to conduct a concert in Abu Dhabi is a good option too. These kind of recreational activities will make the city lively, especially the youngsters will enjoy it more. Apart from that, the profit from this rock concert could be used for the charity work.
Although both these events are highly crucial, I would suggest your company to sponsor the children's football team as these little champions are the future of the society. If you support them then definitely they will return back with the trophy as they are prowess players.
Kindly consider my feedback and support the children's football team, if you find it appropriate.
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
...e achievement for both the participants as well as the nation. Furthermore, the plan to...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...cert in Abu Dhabi is a good option too. These kind of recreational activities will make th...
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
... support them then definitely they will return back with the trophy as they are prowess pla...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01428571429 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63536475507 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3582973074 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175712051312 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649136925888 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536442861019 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993852004888 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388428317207 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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