The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Nowadays one of the most popular means of transport is the airplane, and the number of passengers who take this kind of transport is increasing every year. As a matter of fact, in the last ten year the cost of flying has fallen considerably and for this reason, many people can afford a ticket to visit a foreign country. This essay will argue the benefits and drawbacks of this situation.
There are so many advantages that I can point out when the cost of flying has decreased. First of all, the lower cost would allow people to visit frequently relatives who live in a remote area. In fact, there are a lot of families who have left their hometown for work and do not often see their relatives. Second, fly tickets become more affordable for people who never had the opportunity to buy one. People can travel overseas and visit a paradisiac beach, for instance. These reasons show how traveling by plane can contribute a closer relationship between relatives as well as allowing more people to travel to another country and contribute to tourism.
Although there are some benefits when the cost has dropped, there are relevant disadvantages to point out. Firstly, If more people travel overseas It would be much more likely to get a virus or another disease from. It is the case of coronavirus and other illnesses bring from other countries by passengers. Secondly, with a higher number of passengers, we could see a crowded airport, especially in a small airport. Crowded airport produces chaos, mess and bad mood among people, such as Santiago Airport during the summer season. In short, these disadvantages put in evidence that lower cost brings some issues as well.
This essay argued both the advantages and disadvantages of how the lower cost of flying produces an increase in the number of passengers who go overseas. In conclusion, while there are a lot of benefits, the disadvantages should be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in short, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88753799392 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68004798812 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0915645008 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240077650581 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735368337535 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059489928179 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145209885442 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320840112915 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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